4 different versions of this poem. Which resonates more with you?
1.
There’s an ease, yet unrest.
There’s a quiet, yet a clamor.
There’s comfort, yet distress.
I crave you, yet I reject you.
You are family, yet a stranger.
You are familiar, yet unknown.
You are a remedy, yet there is pain.
You are me, I am you.
Devastating ambiguity unravels my soul.
2.
There’s an ease, yet unrest.
There’s a
quiet, yet a clamor.
There’s comfort, yet distress.
I crave me, yet I reject
me.
I am family, yet a stranger.
I am familiar, yet unknown.
I am a remedy, yet
there is pain.
I am me, You are you.
Devastating ambiguity unravels your soul.
3.
There’s unrest, yet ease.
There’s a
clamor, yet a quiet.
There’s distress, yet comfort.
I am family, yet a stranger.
I am unknown, yet familiar.
There is pain, yet I am the remedy.
I reject me,
but I crave me.
You are you and I am me.
My soul unravels ambiguity devastatingly.
4.
There’s unrest, yet ease.
There’s a clamor,
yet a quiet.
There’s distress, yet comfort.
I reject you, yet I crave you.
You are a stranger, yet you are family.
You are unknown, yet familiar.
There is pain, yet you are my remedy.
We are.
Devastating Ambiguity.
#3 is the most powerful to me, yet I want it to end with the last 2 lines of #4 instead of the last line it has. For me it was the most clear, and shot straight to the heart. Thanks for sharing!
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